6XL Round One - Fighting while Flushed - P2

Round One, Page 2. The Challenger approaches Arcelor Hall.

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Cameos in the next one! Feedback is appreciated. Do you like the sketch + color? Should I try to ink it in time? Or pencil harder anyhow? Text look readable all that stuff? This is my first real comic since I was like... ten. So I would appreciate any and all, even bad comments.

For reference, I am pencil drawing the pages freehand on 8.5x11 paper, then scanning doing light clean up and color in photoshop.